3 poems tell me waht you think :) btw there ny me?

Sounds like you lost someone very close to you, and I believe that you have tapped into the essence of the emotions one deals with through this poetry.....a great outlet at such times. All 3 were interesting, however, #1 was by far your best work. It is simple, yet profound...trademarks of quality poetry. I would keep writing and honing your skills. Remember...just allow the words to tumble from your mind onto the page, without much thought of format, structure, or rhymes. This will allow for the greatest originality by letting your heart do all the talking. Let the pen have a life of its own, never controlled or steered by you. Talent is there......nurture it!