My First Question Here!!! What Do You Think Of This Chapter? Does It Sound Like A Book You Would Buy?

This is the best, well written chapter I have seen so far in this section. :) I couldn't find any mistakes, and the details! They were simply wonderful, creative, and I could visualize everything. Very, very good. I would definitely buy this if it were a book, although your chapter is only a page and a quarter long. Some of the books I read have some chapters where they're like three pages. But, if I were you, I would use 'this' chapter as the prologue and then chapter two as one. :)